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PostCommanderHawk on Mon Jul 31, 2017 1:04 pm

1. PB2 Profile Link:http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?a=&s=7&ac=Commanderhawk


2. Kills Count:23


3. Kill/Death Ratio:1.48


4. Level Developer Rank:0.00.on my alternative account, i have 2.24


5. Predicted Player Points Amount:0


6. Total Time Playing Plazma Burst 2:oftenly, 2 hoursor 1 hours. Rarely, few minutes,or hours.


7. All Alternate Accounts (with profile links):http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?a=&s=7&ac=Fmoch_234&id=1613004. it was my main account but i change it to my alternative account because i have many deaths before and i reset it. Also, i have many kills too before i reset it


8. List all past clans and reasons for leaving them:i have no past clan


9. Why are you applying for YRN?good clan


10. How can you benefit YRN?good one,having friendlys


10b. How will YRN benefit you?maybe good skills.


11. List some good/bad experiences in your most recent clan:respect from other clans.Wink


11b. List some experiences you wish to have in YRN:i want to be an official member or good member


12. What YRN Members do you know?AzrilAdni, juan.


13. In your opinion what makes YRN different and/or better from other clans?well,good, respectful clan.


14. Most frequently played server and average ping:1530-275.


15. Discord Username (followed by Discord ID #0000):@Commander☆Hawk[GhostHawk-Navy]#7073


15b. How active will you be on Discord, YRN forums, and PB2?some days, and i oftenly active in discord.


16. What are your skills within PB2?good skills, followed by ping. I always miss bullet but sometimes, i got hit.


17. Describe what kind of person you are:kind, friendly, good. Secretly, im a planner, sometimes.
18. What do you value more: Skill or Attitude?both of them are on good value, but sometimes, i suck.


19. Country of Residence:Indonesia


20. Do you understand the recruitment process?yes, i understand.


21. Do you meet all requirements to join?yes i do.


22. By submitting this application, you understand that you must comply with all rules of YRN on the chat as well as the forums. You also understand that violation of said rules could result in the removal of you from the clan. Do you agree to these terms?yes, i agree.


23. Extra comments:i need to earn more kills and become a pro.
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PostEuphoric Budweiser on Mon Jul 31, 2017 1:28 pm

I know that English isn't your native language, but overall this application is vague and rather sloppy:

@CommanderHawk wrote:10. How can you benefit YRN?good one,having friendlys

-Your ideas of benefiting our clan ("having friendlys") isn't really convincing considering that's the basic motive of every clan member.


@CommanderHawk wrote:13. In your opinion what makes YRN different and/or better from other clans?well,good, respectful clan.

-Every clan is unique from other clans, but your mentions won't cut it. It takes more to show us what you know about YRN and its superlative qualities.


@CommanderHawk wrote:18. What do you value more: Skill or Attitude?both of them are on good value, but sometimes, i suck.

-What does "but sometimes, i suck" mean, and what does it have to do with the question? If you can't clarify your application in one-shot, then we won't be able to understand you.

There are lots of errors you need to fix in your application. Other members will check on your application soon, but most likely they'll think the same thing.
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PostRed X on Mon Jul 31, 2017 3:03 pm

Why do you want YRN to be your first clan?
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PostSuperFrank1004 on Mon Jul 31, 2017 9:22 pm

Wao.....I have some questions for u Mr.......it seems like you are not meeting all requirements if you join yrn....you only have 23 kills T_T . To me you just want to put the tag on in your username. Why you choose us instead of BoZ or GeNo.....what makes us different from them? Any other good skills you have? Anything else you can benefit for yrn instead of "having friendlys"? You need to elaborate more on this app next time...like i said I think you just want to put the tag in your name and not benefit that much here.
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PostWoo Woo on Tue Aug 01, 2017 8:07 am

@CommanderHawk wrote:
6. Total Time Playing Plazma Burst 2:oftenly, 2 hoursor 1 hours. Rarely, few minutes,or hours.
As you meet none of the requirements to join, I would like to know the actual time you've started playing pb2(a year like "2016")
I have no questions and no hope for this application.

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PostKobe on Tue Aug 01, 2017 4:32 pm

The application is somewhat poor. The answers are vague or dont respond to the questions.
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PostAurez on Wed Aug 02, 2017 6:12 am

The Application ain't that good. Poor answers. Not sure how'd you get in.
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PostRed X on Wed Aug 02, 2017 1:27 pm



You have by tomorrow to respond or this application will be denied.
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PostCommanderHawk on Thu Aug 03, 2017 6:35 am

I will answer all your questions.
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PostCommanderHawk on Thu Aug 03, 2017 6:37 am

It seems i have alot questions to answer
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PostCommanderHawk on Thu Aug 03, 2017 6:47 am

@Euphoric Budweiser wrote:I know that English isn't your native language, but overall this application is vague and rather sloppy:

@CommanderHawk wrote:10. How can you benefit YRN?good one,having friendlys

-Your ideas of benefiting our clan ("having friendlys") isn't really convincing considering that's the basic motive of every clan member.


@CommanderHawk wrote:13. In your opinion what makes YRN different and/or better from other clans?well,good, respectful clan.

-Every clan is unique from other clans, but your mentions won't cut it. It takes more to show us what you know about YRN and its superlative qualities.


@CommanderHawk wrote:18. What do you value more: Skill or Attitude?both of them are on good value, but sometimes, i suck.

-What does "but sometimes, i suck" mean, and what does it have to do with the question? If you can't clarify your application in one-shot, then we won't be able to understand you.

There are lots of errors you need to fix in your application. Other members will check on your application soon, but most likely they'll think the same thing.
well,im not good at english.but i do understand all your questions.first,i dont have an idea what im saying,so im saying these
@CommanderHawk wrote:good one,having friendlys and well,good, respectful clan.
and but sometimes i suck means i suck at combat because of my ping.
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PostCommanderHawk on Thu Aug 03, 2017 6:53 am

@Red X wrote:Why do you want YRN to be your first clan?
it was long story.if you would reject me or denied this post,thats ok... I will join other clans.
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PostCommanderHawk on Thu Aug 03, 2017 7:16 am

@SuperFrank1004 wrote:Wao.....I have some questions for u Mr.......it seems like you are not meeting all requirements if you join yrn....you only have 23 kills T_T . To me you just want to put the tag on in your username. Why you choose us instead of BoZ or GeNo.....what makes us different from them? Any other good skills you have? Anything else you can benefit for yrn instead of "having friendlys"? You need to elaborate more on this app next time...like i said I think you just want to put the tag in your name and not benefit that much here.
i need to met minimum requirements,having friendlys mean i have no idea what i texting so i text that.i know i need to elaborate more,also put the tag is broking my reputation.it makes me looks like a spy,i wont do that for my reputation.instead,i make my main account to my alternative account on purpose.

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PostCommanderHawk on Thu Aug 03, 2017 7:21 am

@Woo Woo wrote:
@CommanderHawk wrote:
6. Total Time Playing Plazma Burst 2:oftenly, 2 hoursor 1 hours. Rarely, few minutes,or hours.
As you meet none of the requirements to join, I would like to know the actual time you've started playing pb2(a year like "2016")
I have no questions and no hope for this application.
it means,it suppost to be this[/quote][color=#663399]oftenly 2 hours because i play in InternetCafes or 1 hour.rarely,few minutes and few hours(made a map).i text it too fast.
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PostCommanderHawk on Thu Aug 03, 2017 7:25 am

@Woo Woo wrote:
@CommanderHawk wrote:
6. Total Time Playing Plazma Burst 2:oftenly, 2 hoursor 1 hours. Rarely, few minutes,or hours.
As you meet none of the requirements to join, I would like to know the actual time you've started playing pb2(a year like "2016")
I have no questions and no hope for this application.
@Woo Woo wrote:
@CommanderHawk wrote:
6. Total Time Playing Plazma Burst 2:oftenly, 2 hoursor 1 hours. Rarely, few minutes,or hours.
As you meet none of the requirements to join, I would like to know the actual time you've started playing pb2(a year like "2016")
I have no questions and no hope for this application.
and im an old player,i played this game since the first release back in 2011,i was a pro at combat before except a lag makes me bad.i create my account in 2017.before i creating my account,i was a player playing as guest.
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